根据HONGHLAJ的意见,修改如下:
Gu mij siengj hawj mwngz saem in
Loeng ndij hingz, aen saem nwj mij ok.
Gu(gou) maij mwngz liz mij liz yungh?
Fungzfak nwj bae gyae, saem ndiep mwngz, mbouj miz yungh.
Ndiep ndij maij ,doh deng gu saem lai.
Song laeuz, daeuj caemh gueg daiz hix.
Liz hunz(vunz) ndaej baenz beuz, liz hunz dawz lapj,
Gaij swenj neix aen saem gu sen ngonz ndaej haen(raen).
Gu mij siengj hawj mwngz saem in,
Swenj ndei swenj nyag gag coq loengz(roengz) ndaw saem.
Saem miz nyagnyuq, daengz ciuh gu gug mij ndiej.
Ce de maij de baenz nyag baenz nya.
Saem maij gvaq mwngz,
Ce mij ndaej hawj mwngz in,
Saem in saem nyab gag faenh lajndang.
Miz ndaej baenz beuz gyouz cin gag byaij loengzbae.
Hun(fwn) doek lumz(rumz) laux goj mij bae nwj,
Cix maij de.
我认为桂边土语的“有”还应是“LIZ",“事”应是"SWENJ"。