土著虎尾 发表于 2008-9-6 11:06:00

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<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;">最近,我写了一篇小言论,题为《</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;">“两风办”干得好意味着什么</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;">》,原稿全文如下:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">一个只有</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">11</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">名工作人员的非常设机构——安徽砀山县干部作风、部门行风建设领导小组办公室(简称“两风办”),竟然在短短数月内,掀起了砀山县的“吏治风暴”:在明察暗访、民主评议行风活动中干部作风、部门行风建设中,采取实地查看的方法,给近</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">7</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">成的县直机关单位打出了“不及格”;这个机构还公开通报多名部门负责人,建议开除多人,结果已经有城管局、文联等单位的一把手被免职。他们所有的活动,都向社会公开通报,并不遮掩、护短。这是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">8</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">4</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">日,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">新华网转载</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">安徽在线文章《</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 19.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">砀山七成单位考评不及格</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">》的大意。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">文章肯定砀山县“两风办”干得好,<span style="COLOR: #e66b1a;">意味着砀山县纪委、监察局干得不好</span>。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 15.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">本来,县</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">纪委、监察局</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 15.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">负责检查并处理县直机关各部门、各企事业单位和乡(镇)党组织以及县委管理的党员领导干部违反党的章程及其他党内法规的案件,按有关条例或规定,决定或取消对这些案件中的党员的处分;负责调查处理县政府各部门及其国家公务员、县政府及县政府各部门任命的其他人员、各乡(镇)人民政府及其领导人员、各乡(镇)国家公务员及各乡(镇)任命的其他人员违反国家政策、法律法规以及违反政纪的行为,并根据责任人所犯错误的情节轻重,做出撤职及撤职以下的行政处分(对涉及选举产生的领导干部按法定程序办理);调查全县党组织和党员遵纪守法情况,调查监察对象遵纪守法情况;履行县政府纠风办职责,指导全县纠正部门和行业不正之风工作,并做好督促检查工作。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">但是,在砀山县,纪委、监察局上述这些职责却变成了“两风办”的工作,<span style="COLOR: #e66b1a;">真不知道县纪委、监察局干什么去了</span>?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -1pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 15.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">“其他部门解决不了的事,找‘两风办’!”</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                        </font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">砀山县“两风办”副主任张励华说,砀山百姓、企业在与政府部门打交道的过程中,有了新的认识。从张励华的话语中,我们不难听出其中喑含之意。这里说的“其他部门解决不了的事”,当然包括县</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">纪委、监察局</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">解决不了的事在内啦。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">领导在审稿时,把“<span style="COLOR: #e66b1a;">意味着砀山县纪委、监察局干得不好</span>”和“真不知道县纪委、监察局干什么去了”删除了。这是文章的关键句子啊,其中“<span style="COLOR: #e66b1a;">意味着砀山县纪委、监察局干得不好</span>”是作者的观点,也是承上启下的文字,这样一删,观点没有了,承上启下的文字也没有了。</span></p>

好好瑟 发表于 2008-9-6 17:15:00

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yeheyu12 发表于 2008-9-6 16:55:00

报社有修改稿件的权利.没得说的.

度莫 发表于 2008-9-6 12:22:00

<strong><font size="4">和蟹社会啊!</font></strong>
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